English 11 Homework for Wednesday, to Monday -  Oct. Monday the 24th

**Hand in Essay Revisions on Monday, 24th at the beginning of class.

1. Your Essay Revisions follow the Sentence-by-Sentence Revision Structure handout I gave you. 

2. Also, improve by rewriting, one of your Body Paragraphs -  the one that needs the most revising. These two revisions are due Monday the 24th.

3. Oral presentation of the Synthesis of "The Lottery" and "Who Saw Murder Didn't Call the Police": Read both of these stories carefully and more than once, and do the questions I have assigned, below.

**Read "Who Saw Murder Didn't Call the Police" by Martin Gansberg. Read it a couple of times.  Then work on the questions 3a, 2a, 4a + b, 5, 7a, 8a +b

 Make sure you have done the Lottery Questions I assigned, earlier.

** Prepare a presentation of synthesis for these two stories. Part of Monday is to practice your presentation; then we can begin one or two of them later in the block. We will complete the presentations on Tuesday, Oct. 25.

You must know the short story and the article well; and you must be able to show what they tell us about human nature.  Don't hesitate to bring in the contemporary world to help you make your important points.

You will hand in your organized notes to me after your presentation.