English 9 Homework for Wednesday:

1. Introductory Paragraph: Rewrite your Introductory Paragraph using what you learned in today's class, improving the ideas, and the written expression. Use your Marking Symbol Handout to help you.

2. Start the same process for your first Body Paragraph. Write a Topic Sentence that makes sense for the content of the Paragraph, and start writing the paragraph.  I will give you a couple of days to complete a revision of the whole essay.