Ms. Tyre's 2nd entry for English 10 Homework later next week:

1. Please read the entry before this one for what is due on Monday.

2. Later in the week (by Friday or earlier) you will hand in a revision of your weakest Body Paragraph from your Plato-Benet Essay.  You will revise the Topic Sentence of the paragraph to include synthesis, and in the rest of the paragraph you will add concrete examples from the text, a thorough discussion of those examples, 1 or 2 integrated quotes that serve an important purpose in the discussion, and a Concluding Sentence that ends the discussion and reminds the reader of the main point.

Do your revision on a separate page and identify what paragraph it is ie. Body Paragraph #___. This will be word-processed, 12 pt ft. TNR, double-spaced. Underline the new content and any other words you change. Staple the original essay underneath the revision.