English 10 Homework for Thursday, Feb. 19:

1. Revision of "The Loons" paragraph: Rewrite your five paragraphs to improve your Topic Sentences, examples and explanations, integrations, and Concluding Sentences.  

I would like you to be doing this kind of Homework on a word-processor, as you can do a better job.  Never print any of your work out until you have looked over your work three or four times. Please staple your original paragraphs underneath your Revised ones.

2. B Block: Read your English Language Arts Essay I returned to you, today, and contemplate your repetitive errors and other areas where you need to improve. Keep it in your Binder, as you will make a Personal Edit Checklist tomorrow in class, from this essay.

D Block: I will return your essays, tomorrow.